slide 13 - Feedback of my media product?

In class our teacher printed up our finished products and places them each on their own table. Every member of the class was then handed a sheet of paper which contained 10 questions. The idea of the excercise was that we went around table to table accessing the work of our peers. The purpose of the task allowed us to gain an insight to what others thought of our work and what aspects they beleived werent as good as others. It also allowed us to asses others work and compare it to our own in order to gain ideas and inspiration for future tasks at A2 level.

The questions which we had to answer were as follows:
1) Target Audience of the finished media product?
2)Genre of the finished media product?
3)Is their a clear Housestyle, and is this continuous?
4)Do 3 pages fill exspectations?
5)Do articles forfill exspectations?
6)Images used suitable?
7)Overall impact of DPS?
8)Is the finished product suitable to fit its intended genre?
9)Any errors?
10)Any improvement which could be made?

Feedback:

Candidate #1;

1)I think the target audience is Teens.

2)Rock or maybe Indie.

3)Yes, blue black white.

4)Yes

5)Yes

6)Yes

7)Good, some errors.

8)Yes

9)Few spelling mistakes, minor errors

10)Proof read work

Candiate #2;

1)Youngsters/Teens

2)Rock?

3)Yes, brick wall is good.

4)Yes

5)Yes

6)Yes

7)Yes pretty good some errors.

8)Yes

9)Hmm, frontcover "kayley kills" contents "kelsey kills"

10) Proof read work to avoid above.

Candiate #3

1)Young adults 14-16

2)Unsure.

3)Yes good housestyle and yes its constant.

4)Yes

5)Yes

6)Yes

7)Pretty good, well done!

8)Think so unsure on genre though.

9)All seems okay maybe a few small errors.

10)Check for small errors and the text on the DPS the title reading VAMP gets lost in the background.